On this fourth anniversary of beginning my Rabbit Lane blog of poetry, memoir, song, and craft, I have decided to post the very first poem I wrote, at about age 11, entitled “Mountain Song.” In the intervening 43 years, I have written over 450 poems, contained in a massive binder on my bookshelf. I look at that binder and think, “There, between the covers, is my soul.” Writing poetry is not an intellectual exercise for me. Certainly I use my best intellect to hone diction and line. But for me each poem must arise from a compelling image, emotion, or memory. Anything else is mere words on a page. My rough, juvenile poem below expresses my love of nature. I hope you enjoy it, and I hope you live looking for the hidden depths underpinning all we experience.
MOUNTAIN SONG
I am the mountain.
I stand majestic and tall.
I am the mountain.
I look over and take care of the valley.
I have a vest of trees,
of green piney trees.
I stand above all other mountains.
I stand majestic and tall.
Roger is the author of Rabbit Lane: Memoir of a Country Road. The book tells the true life story of an obscure and magical farm road and its power to transform the human spirit. The book is available in print and for Kindle at Amazon. See Rabbit Lane reviewed in Words and Pictures.
I so agree with you. Poetry is about experiences, beliefs and feelings. No exercise!
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Lovely to hear from your eleven-year-old self, Roger…and the mountain looms taller than ever.
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That shy, quiet little boy is a world away yet still here inside.
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That poem is quite a portent of the poet and artist you would become. It is also an early indication of your depth.
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Thank you, sis!
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